mal vi você chegar
e nem me dei conta
de quando você levou minha coberta
minhas roupas, minha proteção
e me deixou à mostra, nua
de repente, eu era feliz de novo
mesmo envolta por essa vulnerabilidade mil
e agora eu tou rendida demais
já e ainda
então vem pra cá
e deixa todo o resto pra depois
viva o pecado capital da preguiça..
vem desperdiçar suas horas comigo
fazendo o nada mais gostoso que existe
se espalha todo pelo chão
se estica, se entrelaça
et m'embrasses!
three in one day, what a wonderful surprise. :-) all three are wonderful, that goes without saying, but - even better - they are all different, in style and (more or less) in subject. this one is like the first you wrote today, about a dream, fantasy, but it is sadder - and sexier, or maybe more passionate is better. Whereas the first is very sweet, to me in this one, there is a much sadder note, a much stronger saudade, emptiness, longing and unfulfilled desired. It is also stronger - and I think shows you naked, not just figuratively or literally in the way you write it, but also mentally and emotionally.. Your desire, missing, needs are all open... another time I will write more, the baby is crying... keep writing
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