seguindo estrelas,
busca se encontrar
solto no mundo
solto e feliz
só e contente
completo,
fora embora de mim
cadê o vazio?
cadê a paixão?
tudo desabava
na estação,
olho nos olhos de todos
procuro em cada rosto
você
procuro em cada vão,
em cada vagão,
seu sorriso
desapegado demais,
desatou nossos laços num piscar,
assim, coisa simples
como desamarrar uns cadarços..
Solto no mundo, solto e feliz
ResponderExcluirI like this, short, interesting and full of bitter-sweet, even conflict, emotions. It sounds like you are learning how to be alone, or maybe that should be learnign how to be yourself in this world, how to be independent and to live to your potential and follow your dreams.. even though this might involved untying laços.. which although you say it is a simple thing, como desamarrar uns cadarços, it is not.
You, the poet, in this sound like you are caught between two different ways, one is to stay close to the 'você' of the poem, the other is to continue to seguir estrelas bsucando se encontrar... I think I know which one you will choose..
Keep writing, please
PS this was written after several nights with little sleep, so I hope it makes sense ha haha