tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post7354875825242731491..comments2023-06-29T05:27:45.680-03:00Comments on Chez mes pensées: rascunho de cartaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post-42645436897765338122012-03-21T23:55:10.955-03:002012-03-21T23:55:10.955-03:00This is not really a comment. I know that you and ...This is not really a comment. I know that you and Florbela Espanca have a connection (you told me so.. ha ha ha). I discovered half an hour ago that there is now a film about her - and left on your facebook the link I had read - I investigated more and found the site for the filme, which is below.. I didnt want to put something else on your fb, so the link is below. I liked the trailer, think you will too. How will you find the Portuguese from Portugal? :-) <br /><br />http://florbela.pt/Eoinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06460171770621434739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post-63117203641077941422012-03-05T14:13:30.184-03:002012-03-05T14:13:30.184-03:00Thius is not a real comment, more of a mad idea I ...Thius is not a real comment, more of a mad idea I had... How many poems do you have about this relationship? 5 or 6? You could put them all together as a little book... (along with some drawings, or photos.. and I know you draw well and take good photos). Just an idea... :-) I know you probably won`t do this, not now at least. You really don`t have time at the moment, but I would really love to see you published, and for you to get the recognition I think you deserve. Though I have a feeling you mightn`t want this (yet). Maybe some day? For now, I feel so privileged to read your work, and I will always be encouraging you to write more (hopefully in a nice way, ha ha ha).Eoinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06460171770621434739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post-34694272783130399012012-03-04T21:53:06.143-03:002012-03-04T21:53:06.143-03:00It was a great surprise to find not just one, but ...It was a great surprise to find not just one, but three new poems today!!! I had actually been thinking about making some comments on old poems, but you beat me to it!! :-)<br />As I said earlier, I liked all three, but this is the one that struck me the most, made me think. I will reread them all later, maybe I will change my mind.. but for now it is my favourite of the three.<br />It is a different style, a different poet almost. I know was originally a letter (which I wonder if it was ever sent), but you have managed to make a poem, an honest poem out of it. It is funny reading it I felt it was written for me, which is a skill you have (or a weakness I have??). As is common in your poetry, it is honest, but it feels like a different sort of honesty. You are not laughing at yourself, as you often do. You are exposing the wounds - no, not wounds, scars, remains, of an old love, and with great emotional maturity, telling the other person, the former lover, where it all went wrong. There is sadness there, I am sure, but if feels buried, or finished in the past, for now it seems as if you are trying to move on, but keep something at the same time, a memory, a friendship... THis is a deeply personal poem, but it is also universal in a way, what could be more universal than discussing a love than has ended?<br />I will leave more comments later, or in the next few days.. dont want to give you too much to read in one go, ha ha ha<br />Keep writing :-)Eoinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06460171770621434739noreply@blogger.com