tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post2125704095046121429..comments2023-06-29T05:27:45.680-03:00Comments on Chez mes pensées: como seUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5529731972349856166.post-21016701002436918932012-06-19T13:52:48.765-03:002012-06-19T13:52:48.765-03:00I am writing this during the day, so I won´t fall ...I am writing this during the day, so I won´t fall alseep ha ha ha! I am so tired these days - its whats comes from looking after a baby I suppose!!! <br />As usual I loved the peom, it is good to see you writing regularly again. I hope you will have time to write more soon :-) I also presume that all your recent experience will have given you more than enough material to write hundres more poems.<br />In relation to the poem itself, it feels like you are talking about a dream to me - you are revisiting an old love, a long-lost love, and thinking about WHAT IF. Thinking about somethign that could never be of course... It is a sweet poem, a little sad though, happy and sad maybe describes it better! But it kind of swept me away with it. You are good at conveying moods and scenarios, and bringing the reader into these, making them think they are almost part of the poem. At least, I feel like that, maybe I am jusr crazy!! :-) JJoking aside, you ARE really good at describing moods and feelings... <br />Keep writing, keep using this wonderful talent!Eoinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06460171770621434739noreply@blogger.com